Score: 9

"Excellent work"

submission: Misinterpretive Porn Star

date: April 29, 2009

This is a very promising character you've created. I like the premise and most of all, I like the execution. The jokes are average on paper, but the way they're animated and, especially, voiced, make this a very entertaining flash.

A good example would be the second skit. After Hal says "I think I do", the scene cuts to a scenario so absurd you just have to laugh. Not to mention Hal's expressions, which are always goofy in the best way.

Technically, it's flawless. The art style fits it very well and the animation is detailed and smooth. The lyp synch is very well-done, and the voice acting is amazing. Egoraptor always fails to disappoint in anything he's in, but you and your family also do a great job... er... well, they're very convincing as... mmm. Porn stars.

...

Right, you know what I mean.

Anyway, this is a good character and this concept should be taken to new heights. A sequel, eventually, would be very welcome.

Good job.

Score: 3

"Well..."

submission: Smiles

date: December 22, 2008

Not only it's plagued by technical issues (bad drawings, practically non-existent animation, scene badly fitted into canvas), but the idea itself is poorly explored and pointless. But don't let this stop you. Keep trying to improve, maybe write a script for your next animation so you can further develop your ideas and create a rich piece of work. This one, sadly, is very bad.

Score: 10

"Sensational"

submission: 2008 Showreel

date: December 22, 2008

Impressive work. This is stopmotion on professional level. I know how much patience one needs to animate using this style, so I was even more impressed by how smooth and fluid the animation is. Random, but so what? Entertaining and the music is decent.

Congratulations on a great job. Merry Christmas and I wish 2009 is as productive to you as 2008 apparently was.