Score: 9

"Excellent work"

submission: Misinterpretive Porn Star

date: April 29, 2009

This is a very promising character you've created. I like the premise and most of all, I like the execution. The jokes are average on paper, but the way they're animated and, especially, voiced, make this a very entertaining flash.

A good example would be the second skit. After Hal says "I think I do", the scene cuts to a scenario so absurd you just have to laugh. Not to mention Hal's expressions, which are always goofy in the best way.

Technically, it's flawless. The art style fits it very well and the animation is detailed and smooth. The lyp synch is very well-done, and the voice acting is amazing. Egoraptor always fails to disappoint in anything he's in, but you and your family also do a great job... er... well, they're very convincing as... mmm. Porn stars.

...

Right, you know what I mean.

Anyway, this is a good character and this concept should be taken to new heights. A sequel, eventually, would be very welcome.

Good job.

Score: 3

"Well..."

submission: Smiles

date: December 22, 2008

Not only it's plagued by technical issues (bad drawings, practically non-existent animation, scene badly fitted into canvas), but the idea itself is poorly explored and pointless. But don't let this stop you. Keep trying to improve, maybe write a script for your next animation so you can further develop your ideas and create a rich piece of work. This one, sadly, is very bad.

Score: 10

"Sensational"

submission: 2008 Showreel

date: December 22, 2008

Impressive work. This is stopmotion on professional level. I know how much patience one needs to animate using this style, so I was even more impressed by how smooth and fluid the animation is. Random, but so what? Entertaining and the music is decent.

Congratulations on a great job. Merry Christmas and I wish 2009 is as productive to you as 2008 apparently was.

Score: 10

"Excellent short"

submission: BiteyCastle Christmas

date: December 22, 2008

Like every flash animation made by you, Adam: impeccable.

Score: 6

"Acceptable"

submission: All The Trees

date: July 11, 2008

It's a decent effort. I like some of the style and how the animation synchs with the music - which is quite weak, in my opinion. But the animation is inconsistent, with some good ones (the tree) and some bad ones (the squirrel). The whole thing is also a bit boring and doesn't have a particularly interesting message. But it's a decent effort.

Score: 4

"Before I say anything on the animation itself..."

submission: StreetFighter Ult. Ed. 3

date: July 11, 2008

... try not complaining about your previous animation's score inside your NEW animation. If you think the people who reviewed your work negatively because of your all-caps writing are morons, don't bother responding to them because it makes you sound like an even bigger moron. And making said writing flicker continuously between white and red only makes it all worse.

Now, about the animation itself. Sprite movies are nothing new, but it's been proved they can be quite good if done correctly. Unfortunately, your work lacks the creativity of a series like SF vs. MK, in which the two fighters come up with intelligent strategies to defeat each other, using every ability they have available. In your animation, they just hit each other without a lot of charm or appeal. Also, the moment where they have a blue fireball between them is overlong and cliche.

The sprites are decent enough, but your animation isn't. I could clearly spot some ugly gaps like Chun Li being thrown in the air and falling on a spot too far from where she should have landed. In short, it lacks intensity and smoothness.

But it's mildly entertaining. Just work on the animation, coreography and stop bitching in the loading screen.

Score: 10

"Brilliant"

submission: Animator vs. Animation II

date: July 11, 2008

The smooth animation is secondary to your creativity in the way you use the Flash program and the desktop icons to make the fight more interesting. It's just brilliant, imaginative work. Congratulations.

Score: 0

"Awful"

submission: Mario's !Block Trouble

date: July 11, 2008

Sorry, but Mario hitting a block, enemies falling from the sky and Mario defeating three of them is a terrible story. On top of that, the animation and framerate are poor and overall it's just sloppy.

Score: 10

"Fantastic"

submission: How Are You Now?

date: July 11, 2008

I'm impressed, to say the least. This is a powerful little story with beautiful dialogue that fits the young characters perfectly. It's also a wonderful tribute. It's great to see such a sensitive, touching piece of art like this in Newgrounds.

I wish all the best to China and the people who were affected by the earthquake and not just by it, but also by China's several social problems.

Score: 0

"Very poor"

submission: Every you

date: July 11, 2008

No animation, sloppy art and badly-timed. This slideshow takes too long to switch from a drawing to another, and it's not worth the wait because they need a lot of improvement.